Need everybodys opinion please!!

[Dom]

Awesome LilRed. I loved the music, not only a great beginning but throughout. I really think you got the right composition, my heart did a beat when it started, and that's just on my lil laptop!!

In fact, from my untrained view you could leave it as is and have the desired dramatic effect.

Now, I'm not sure what kind of equipment you used, but I noticed all the pans were zooming. If there's one thing you want to try it might be to vary them, i.e., some from in close to pan out, and from the larger scenery slides coming from left or right in.

I enjoyed that a lot, I think you did a great job, Waidmannsheil, Dom.